Sunday, June 26, 2011

All but a Cloud

It is all but a cloud,

Just blow it away ..

Even if it is dark,

You can will it away..

After all it is a cloud,

It will float astray..

One minute it is there,

and gone in the next..

For all you know,

It may not really Rain ..
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3 comments:

  1. geetanjaliJune 26, 2011 at 10:57 PM

    Hey

    I like it. Very simple. Yet strong. :)
    I like the ending.

    Time to send new word!!!

    Enjoy

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  2. little boxesJuly 5, 2011 at 8:55 PM

    the imagery is simple yet beautiful :)
    and so much latent pain in the poem.
    beautiful!

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  3. dreamerJuly 8, 2011 at 2:36 AM

    Thanks People ! I thought it was a tad to simple maybe and did contemplate removing it ! But your comments are encouraging :)

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